There are many many stupid errors.(Judaism AREthe odlest religion, Jewish ARE a monoteist religion, and God AREYahveh. Abraham sacrificed Her child.The sacred person are.The Menorah ARE.The wall ARE etc etc. MENS WOMENS holocost ARE So your work could be very interesting. It is also cut by half so I can't read anything. 6/10 I would change the mark if you correct the errors and if you upload it differently so that I can see everything.
There are many many stupid errors.(Judaism AREthe odlest religion, Jewish ARE a monoteist religion, and God AREYahveh. Abraham sacrificed Her child.The sacred person are.The Menorah ARE.The wall ARE etc etc. MENS WOMENS holocost ARE So your work could be very interesting. It is also cut by half so I can't read anything. 6/10
ResponderEliminarI would change the mark if you correct the errors and if you upload it differently so that I can see everything.